What is the first thing you notice about a person?
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What is the first thing you notice about a person?
Can clothes define a person?
No I\'m first thing notice about shape becuase if I saw old grand father,his face has some wrinkle.
And youg boy\'s height is short also old grand mother hair is purm hair but youg giar hair is long hair.
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No I\'m first thing notice about shape becuase if I saw old grand father,his face has some wrinkle.
>> The face is the very first thing I notice about a person. If I see an old man, I notice the wrinkles on his face.
And youg boy\'s height is short also old grand mother hair is purm hair but youg giar hair is long hair.
>> So as a young boy\'s height, especially if he\'s short, an old woman with permed hair and a young girl with long hair.
These are examples of the things that I notice first about a person.
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