What is the greatest challenge you have faced this month?
학생이 쓴 원문
Well, even though it\'s been only for a month this year, the greatest thing that I challenged is to apply for a job in [이름]gapore. I had never tried it before owing to not fluently speaking in English. But I did it, no one knows what\'s going to happen. Also these days, I\'ve known about the experiences that I\'ve been through are very few, because I didn\'t try to do a lot of things. So I decided to challenge various experiences before I turn 30 years old. Even if there\'s a strange country. So wish me luck :)
강사 첨삭
Hi Elic! Friday is a day to finish your goals for the week. It\'s a day to celebrate that which you set out to accomplish at the beginning of the week. Well done! I wish this Friday will bring you occasion of grace with good health and more happiness. See you next week. Enjoy the rest of the day! ^^
Well, even though it\'s been only for a month this year, the greatest thing that I challenged is to apply for a job in [이름]gapore.
>> Well, even though it\'s been only a month, my greatest challenge so far is to apply for a job in [이름]gapore.
I had never tried it before owing to not fluently speaking in English.
>> This is my first time applying for a job abroad despite of not speaking English fluently.
But I did it, no one knows what\'s going to happen.
>> But I just tried my luck. Anyway, who knows what\'s going to happen.
Also these days, I\'ve known about the experiences that I\'ve been through are very few, because I didn\'t try to do a lot of things.
>> Nowadays, I realized that I have a few life experiences because I wasn\'t able to do a lot of things when I was younger.
So I decided to challenge various experiences before I turn 30 years old. Even if there\'s a strange country. So wish me luck :)
>> So, now I decided to challenge myself to try various new experiences before I turn 30. I will pursue my dream to work abroad even if I\'m not familiar with the country. Wish me luck :)
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