What is the greatest thing that your parents taught you?

2015-05-22 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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The greatest thing that my parents taught me is cleaning.My mom likes cleaning.She doesn't like mess.She always cleans our house.I think she's character is precision. <Diary> Justin Justin is a movie.His grandfather is a good knight.But another knight kill him and stole the sword.His father wants his son is be a lawyer but Justin was fight with another knight and get asword again.And he became knight too.

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Hi [이름]! ^^ :)   Thank you so much for making your homework. So, I think your house is very clean because your mother taught you that. kikiki   The movie, Justin, is quite familiar to me. I think I saw this movie before. I\'m not sure. I think the movie is motivational.   Thanks again [이름]. :)   See you next week! ^^ :)   ~~Teacher Kris     The greatest thing that my parents taught me is cleaning. >> Correct My mom likes cleaning. >> Correct She doesn\'t like mess. >> She doesn\'t like to see messy things around. She always cleans our house. >> Correct I think she\'s character is precision. >> I think she is a perfectionist. <Diary>JustinJustin is a movie. >> Correct His grandfather is a good knight. >> Correct OR: >> Her grandfather is a good and brave knight. But another knight kill him and stole the sword. >> But, another knight killed him and stole the sword. His father wants his son is be a lawyer but Justin was fight with another knight and get asword again. >> His father wanted his son to be lawyer but Justin wanted to attack the knight-- who stole the sword-- and get the sword back. And he became knight too. >> After  that, he became a mighty knight like his father.  

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