What is the greatest thing that your parents taught you?
학생이 쓴 원문
The greatest thing that my parents taught me is cleaning.My mom likes cleaning.She doesn't like mess.She always cleans our house.I think she's character is precision.
<Diary>
Justin
Justin is a movie.His grandfather is a good knight.But another knight kill him and stole the sword.His father wants his son is be a lawyer but Justin was fight with another knight and get asword again.And he became knight too.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^ :)
Thank you so much for making your homework.
So, I think your house is very clean because your mother taught you that. kikiki
The movie, Justin, is quite familiar to me. I think I saw this movie before. I\'m not sure.
I think the movie is motivational.
Thanks again [이름]. :)
See you next week! ^^ :)
~~Teacher Kris
The greatest thing that my parents taught me is cleaning.
>> Correct
My mom likes cleaning.
>> Correct
She doesn\'t like mess.
>> She doesn\'t like to see messy things around.
She always cleans our house.
>> Correct
I think she\'s character is precision.
>> I think she is a perfectionist. <Diary>JustinJustin is a movie.
>> Correct
His grandfather is a good knight.
>> Correct
OR:
>> Her grandfather is a good and brave knight.
But another knight kill him and stole the sword.
>> But, another knight killed him and stole the sword.
His father wants his son is be a lawyer but Justin was fight with another knight and get asword again.
>> His father wanted his son to be lawyer but Justin wanted to attack the knight-- who stole the sword-- and get the sword back.
And he became knight too.
>> After that, he became a mighty knight like his father.
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