What is the \"greenhouse effect\" and what does it do to our environment?
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The greenhouse effect can make our environment cooler.
Because it reflexes the light of the sun and throws it into the galaxy.
But we got the rest of it and it\'s the sun that we see.
This is good because it can protect us a little from global warming.
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What is the \\\"greenhouse effect\\\" and what does it do to our environment?
The greenhouse effect can make our environment cooler.
>>> CORRECT
Because it reflexes the light of the sun and throws it into the galaxy.
>>> Because it reflexes the harmful rays of the sun and throws it back into the galaxy.
But we got the rest of it and it\'s the sun that we see.
>>> So we get the rest of the rays from the sun which are good for our skin.
This is good because it can protect us a little from global warming.
>>> Greenhouse effect protects us from the harmful rays of the sun that if trapped in the earth, will make the global warming much worse.
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