What is the happiest moment that you have experienced with your family?
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'m the happiest when my children are born. That was my best experience. There are other happy things, but it is the best in my family.
I hope to make a lot of happy things with my family.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
4. I hope to make a lot of happy things with my family.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes to remember:
1. I\'m the happiest when my children are born.
>>I was the happiest when my children were born.
2. That was my best experience.
>>Those were my best moments.
3. There are other happy things, but it is the best in my family.
>>There were other happy things, but those moments were the best in my family.
4. I hope to make a lot of happy things with my family.
>>CORRECT!
OR>> I hope to make a lot of happy memories with my family.
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