What is the hardest change that you cannot imagine happening to you soon? Explain.
학생이 쓴 원문
I think it\'s losing my family or friends.
They make me happy, strong, and made my life special.
If they pass away, I will be sad for lots of months.
My friend who has a puppy says that she will die if he dies too.
And I think I will too if my family or friends die.
But I will have other family and friends. They will miss me too.
So I will just think that they are just having a little rest and I will see them soon. (❁´◡`❁)
-The End-
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Please do check and take note of the corrections for your improvement. I hope it helped you.
Keep up the good work!
Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)
What is the hardest change that you cannot imagine happening to you soon? Explain.
I think it\'s losing my family or friends.
>>> CORRECT
They make me happy, strong, and made my life special.
>>> CORRECT
If they pass away, I will be sad for lots of months.
>>> CORRECT
My friend who has a puppy says that she will die if he dies too.
>>> My friend who has a puppy says that she will die if the puppy dies first.
And I think I will too if my family or friends die.
>>> And I think I will feel the same if my family or friends die.
But I will have other family and friends. They will miss me too.
>>> Soon, I\'ll have my own family and friends, I will miss them and they\'ll miss me too.
So I will just think that they are just having a little rest and I will see them soon.
>>> CORRECT
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