What is the hardest thing about being a kid?
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The hardest thing about being a kid for me is that I don’t have many choices that I can decide in my whole life. Most of kids like me should follow the choices the parents decide. Besides, even if I was right l would have to follow adults even at the school just because I am a kid. Actually l think it’s really not fair.
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The hardest thing about being a kid for me is that I don’t have many
choices that I can decide in my whole life. Most of kids like me should
follow the choices the parents decide. Besides, even if I was right l
would have to follow adults even at the school just because I am a kid.
Actually l think it’s really not fair.
>> The hardest thing about being a kid for me is that I don’t have
choices that I can decide for my life. Most kids like me should
follow the choices the parents decide. Besides, even if I was right l
would have to follow the adults even at school just because I am a kid.
Actually l think it’s really not fair.
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