What is the impact of classic movie to the modern world?
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>>> T. James
I like classic movies.
>>> CORRECT
I think that thesedays movies are more stimulate in stories and they have less emotional.
>>> I think that these days movies are more stimulating in stories and they have less emotional.
So, there are a lot of re made movies had be released before such as Lion King, Aladdin.
>>> So, there are a lot of remaking movies had been released before such as Lion King, Aladdin.
They have lots of lessones and make me keep remembering.
>>> They have lots of lessons and make me keep remembering.
Thus, classic movies were lacked technical skills but, give us good lessones.
>>> Thus, classic movies were lacking technical skills, but, give us good lessons.
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