What is the impact of technology in our daily life? Explain in 5-8 sentences.

2019-08-22 · 첨삭 강사 James

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Technology has been brought a lot of effects in our life. we use it everyday. For example, we wake up throught ringing phone alam and then we check our schedule on the phone. Moreover, we watch TV and can get some information or news. Human and Technology can not be separated no longer. I dare to say technology is our life. In addition, we can use it anytime, anywhere. so whenever i wonder something, i can search them i wonder rapidly and can get information in there ( i mean that \"in there\" is the spot where i stand,when i wonder something ). Also, nowdays, medical technology is improved. Many people said that our ages can become longer than before. Technology is affect our life a lot .

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Technology has been brought a lot of effects in our life. 

>>> Technology has been bringing a lot of effects in our life. 

we use it everyday. 

>>>OR: We\'re using it every day.

For example, we wake up throught ringing phone alam and then we check our schedule on the phone. Moreover, we watch TV and can get some information or news. 

>> For example, we woke up throughout ringing phone alarm and then we check our schedule on the phone. Moreover, we watch TV and can get some information or news. 

Human and Technology can not be separated no longer. 

>>> Human and technology can\'t be separated any more. 

I dare to say technology is our life. In addition, we can use it anytime, anywhere. so whenever i wonder something, i can search them i wonder rapidly and can get information in there ( i mean that \"in there\" is the spot where i stand,when i wonder something ).

>>> I dare to say technology is our life. In addition, we can use it anytime, anywhere. So whenever I wonder something, I can search them, I wonder rapidly and can get the information in there (I mean that \"in there\" is the spot where I stand, when I wonder something).

Also, nowdays, medical technology is improved.

>>> Also, nowadays, medical technology is improved.

Many people said that our ages can become longer than before. Technology is affect our life a lot .

>>> Many people said that our ages can become longer than before. Technology is affecting our lives a lot.

 

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