What is the implication of having an aging population?
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Aging population means that the number of young people is decreasing due to low birth rate.
Due to the aging population, young people will have to pay more taxes to maintain the senior medical system and nation pension.
Moreover, there would be economy slowdown. Because there are no young people to engage in economy activities.
If the taxes increase, and the benefits that young people can get from are reduced, then there would be a huge exodus of human resources across the country.
Then competitive of nation would be weak and fall into a vicious circle.
The government will be able to delay or prevent the aging of the population by exceptionally introducing policies to encourage childbirth, creating various profits structures using taxes, and accepting immigration of various talents from abroad.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Philip. It is indeed a serious problem for the country.
Aging population means that the number of young people is decreasing due to low birth rate.
>>> correct
Due to the aging population, young people will have to pay more taxes to maintain the senior medical system and nation pension.
>>> correct
Due to the aging population, young people will have to pay more taxes to maintain the senior medical system and nation pension.
>>> correct
Moreover, there would be economy slowdown. Because there are no young people to engage in economy activities.
>>> Moreover, there would be an economic slowdown because there are no young people to engage in economic activities.
>>> Moreover, there would be an economic slowdown because there are no young people to engage in economic activities.
If the taxes increase, and the benefits that young people can get from are reduced, then there would be a huge exodus of human resources across the country.
>>> If the taxes increase and the benefits that young people can get from the government are reduced, there would be a huge exodus of human resources across the country.
>>> If the taxes increase and the benefits that young people can get from the government are reduced, there would be a huge exodus of human resources across the country.
Then competitive of nation would be weak and fall into a vicious circle.
>>> Then the competitiveness of the nation would be weakened and fall into a vicious cycle.
>>> Then the competitiveness of the nation would be weakened and fall into a vicious cycle.
The government will be able to delay or prevent the aging of the population by exceptionally introducing policies to encourage childbirth, creating various profits structures using taxes, and accepting immigration of various talents from abroad.
>>> correct
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