What is the implication of having an aging population?
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If the number of asing population is more than young population, then the national productivity become lower.
So it is very important to keep a balance of between old population and young population.
It need many young man to support for few old people.
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If the number of asing population is more than young population, then the national productivity become lower.
>> If the aging population is bigger than the young population, then the national productivity will become lower.
So it is very important to keep a balance of between old population and young population.
>> So it is very important to keep a balance between the old and young population.
It need many young man to support for few old people.
>> The society needs many young men to support a few old people.
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