What is the importance of getting to know the local people when you go to a new country?

2017-11-15 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I think that getting to know the local people is the best way to understand the local culture. Also it is more active and direct method than reading a book related to the local. As looking over and meeting them, we can learn how they live, what food they eat, and how they think. If I have a chance to converse with them, it could be best experience to share their life style.

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~~ Teacher Sharon

I think that getting to know the local people is the best way to understand the local culture.

>> I think that getting to know the local people is the best way to understand the local culture.

Also it is more active and direct method than reading a book related to the local.

>> Also, it is a more active and direct method than reading a book about their locality.

As looking over and meeting them, we can learn how they live, what food they eat, and how they think.

>> By looking around the area and meeting the people, we can learn how they live, what food they eat, and how they think.

If I have a chance to converse with them, it could be best experience to share their life style.

>> If I have a chance to converse with them, it would be the best experience to share in their lifestyle.

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