What is the importance of having a mobile phone?
학생이 쓴 원문
I make a conversation with others.
And talk to someone eles.
I can share information through facebook and band
Instagam.
Especially i talk freely with my son at cacaotalk in Paris.
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Hello [이름]! Thank you for taking your time in making your homework! See you tomorrow! (^^,)
I make a conversation with others.
>>> CORRECT!
And talk to someone eles.
>>> I also talk to someone else.
I can share information through facebook and band
Instagam.
>>> I can share information through facebook and ban someone on instagram.
Especially i talk freely with my son at cacaotalk in Paris.
>> Most importantly, I talk with my son in Paris using Kaao talk.
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