What is the importance of having time with your family?
학생이 쓴 원문
I can talk openly and easily about my problems. I can also have a healing time. I also feel responsible for each other. It serves as a support for hardships and difficulties.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sir [이름]! Thank you so much for taking the time to answer the question. Here are some of the corrections, but I think you really did great. :)
I can talk openly and easily about my problems.
>> CORRECT!
I can also have a healing time.
>> CORRECT!
I also feel responsible for each other.
>> I also have the feeling of responsibility towards the family members.
It serves as a support for hardships and difficulties.
>> CORRECT!
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