What is the importance of kindness in everyday life?

2024-03-12 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

학생이 쓴 원문

I think kindness affects to a person most who tried to be kind. Because being kind can make one\'s relationship, self image and feeling better. Being kind is a very efficient way to be happy. We don\'t invest much but we can enjoy sufficient output(making ourselves and other people happy). That\'s why we should be kind. It\'s not only for others but also for ourselves.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] [이름], 

Your reflection on the importance of kindness truly resonates. Your insights highlight how kindness not only enhances relationships but also uplifts our own well-being. Keep spreading positivity and enriching lives through your kindness! 

~Teacher Cathy 

 

I think kindness affects to a person most who tried to be kind 

>>I believe kindness affects a person most when they strive to be kind. 

Because being kind can make one\'s relationship, self image and feeling better.  

>>Because being kind can improve one\'s relationships, self-image, and overall well-being. 

Being kind is a very efficient way to be happy.  

>>CORRECT 

OR>>Being kind is a highly effective way to experience happiness. 

We don\'t invest much but we can enjoy sufficient output(making ourselves and other people happy).  

>>CORRECT 

OR>>We don\'t need to invest much, yet we can enjoy sufficient output by making ourselves and other people happy. 

That\'s why we should be kind.  

>>CORRECT 

OR>>That is the reason why we should be kind. 

It\'s not only for others but also for ourselves. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>> It\'s not only for others but also for ourselves that kindness is valuable. 

 

 

 

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