What is the importance of taking care of nature? What can we do to take care of it?
학생이 쓴 원문
We already face global warming.
Because we have destroyed nature for a long time.
If we wouldn\'t take care of nature, it would cause many sideeffect more than now.
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We already face global warming. Because we have destroyed nature for a long time.
>> We are already facing global warming because we’ve been destroying nature for a long time.
If we wouldn\'t take care of nature, it would cause many sideeffect more than now.
>> If we don’t take care of nature, it will cause even more side effects than we’re seeing now.
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