What is the interesting article about health which i have read
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It was about sugar.
The article said sugar is very bad for our health but we are eating lots of sugar, so we need to reduce sugar
Especially we usually drink fruit juice after having a meal, this is very bad habit.
In fruit juice, there is lots of sugar
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WRITING TASK: Do you ever read magazines or news articles about health?
The article said sugar is very bad for our health but we are eating lots of sugar, so we need to reduce sugar
Especially we usually drink fruit juice after having a meal, this is very bad habit.
In fruit juice, there is lots of sugar
If yes, what subject(s) do you find the most interesting?
It was about sugar.
>> The article I have read was about sugar.
The article said sugar is very bad for our health but we are eating lots of sugar, so we need to reduce sugar
>> The article said that sugar is very bad for our health but we consume a lot of sugar and we need to reduce it.
Especially we usually drink fruit juice after having a meal, this is very bad habit.
>> Especially the fruit juice drinks that we drink after having a meal, Drinking these juices is a very bad habit.
In fruit juice, there is lots of sugar
Fruit juices have lots of sugar.
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