What is the last product you bought but defective ?
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Dear [Name],
Recently, I don\'t buy anything. But if it is defective something, I will ask to refund it.
A few month ago, I ordered air clean machine from on line shopping mall, but I knew my order had a mistake. So I want to ask for cancellation about this order, but they rejected my request. Because It passed long time from purchase date. So I called them repeatedly for refunding, but They always rejected my request. so I decided that I never buy anything from the shopping mall. But I bought something from them again. They sell many thing cheaper than the others.
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Here are your corrections:
Recently, I don\'t buy anything.
>> CORRECT
But if it is defective something, I will ask to refund it.
>> But, if it is defective, I will as for a refund.
A few month ago, I ordered air clean machine from on line shopping mall, but I knew my order had a mistake.
>> A few months ago, I ordered an air cleaning machine from an online shopping mall but, I knew my order was a mistake.
So I want to ask for cancellation about this order, but they rejected my request. Because It passed long time from purchase date.
>> So, I wanted to ask for cancellation but, they always rejected my request because it was passed a long time from the purchase date.
So I called them repeatedly for refunding, but They always rejected my request. so I decided that I never buy anything from the shopping mall.
>> I kept on calling them for refund but they kept on rejecting my request. So, I decided that I\'ll never buy anything from that shopping mall.
But I bought something from them again.
>> But then I ate what I said because I bought something from them again.
They sell many thing cheaper than the others.
>> I did it because they sell many things that is cheaper than others.
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