what is the longest distance you've been ever traveled?
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I envy you Miss. [Name]! I hope I will be able to travel to many countries when I grow old.
I hope to visit South Korea and meet you too. I\'m crossing my fingers it will be soon. ^^,
~Teacher Shanee^^,
I have been to many countries such as West Europe, Spain,Portugal,America,Newgeland..... They are similar distance from Korea.
>>> I have been to many countries such as Spain, Portugal, America, New Zealand. They have similar distance from Korea.
I went to the West europe with my members.
>>> I went to West Europe with my family members.
Spain went with my daughter.
>>> I went to Spain with my daughter.
American went with my best friend.
>>> I visited America with my best friend.
New zealand went my cousins.
>>> And I traveled to New Zealand with my cousins.
And then ,I saw a wonderful history and scenery.
>>> I saw many interesting historical places and wonderful scenery.
I was good to hang out with a foreigner.
>>> I was good at hanging out with foreigners.
It\'s the longest distance trip for South america to go in march next year.
>>> My trip to South America in March next year will be my longest overseas travel.
It takes about 24 hours by plane.
I look forward to the trip.
And When i get older, I\'ll go to the nearby place with my husband.
>>> And when I get older, I\'ll go to nearby places with my husband.
I hope Shanee will meet someday.
>>> I hope to meet Shanee someday.
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