what is the matter?

2011-03-15 · 첨삭 강사 Tiny

학생이 쓴 원문

As you know, I don't have any sibling. Because my parents worried that I felt lonely during childhood, they made me get along with cousins. We have a lot of things in common due to similar ages. Who I want to say is one of them. He is one year older than me and a medical student. He has been brilliant since a kid. I hated to compare with him among our relatives when we were young. So I didn't like hanging out with him, besides I thought he looked stuck up. One day he wanted to chat with me on the Internet when I had a hard time to enter a college. He adviced many things to me and I got I misunderstood him. After then, we could hit it off. However he has chaged recently because of his girlfriend !! I'm sad we are the same as us in the past.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! I am sorry that you aren’t getting along with your cousin but thanks to his girlfriend. Haha! -Tiny^0^ As you know, I don't have any sibling. >>correctBecause my parents worried that I felt lonely during childhood, they made me get along with cousins. >> Because my parents worried that I felt lonely during childhood, they made me get along with my cousins. We have a lot of things in common due to similar ages. >>correctWho I want to say is one of them. >>I want to talk about one of them. He is one year older than me and a medical student. >>correct He has been brilliant since a kid. >> He has been brilliant since he is a kid. I hated to compare with him among our relatives when we were young. >> I hated to be compared with him among our relatives when we were young. So I didn't like hanging out with him, besides I thought he looked stuck up. >>correctOne day he wanted to chat with me on the Internet when I had a hard time to enter a college. >>correctHe adviced many things to me and I got I misunderstood him. >> He adviced many things to me and I misunderstood him. After then, we could hit it off. >>correctHowever he has chaged recently because of his girlfriend !! >>correctI'm sad we are the same as us in the past >> I'm sad we are the same in the past  

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