What is the meaning of life for you?
학생이 쓴 원문
For me, life means present. If we think a little more, it doesn\'t make sense that we are. It\'s a ridiculous sentence but anyway. So I think I should think my life as a miracle and thank for it. That\'s why I want to live my life well. My life is literally all I have and it\'s precious for me. So I want to enjoy my life well. It doesn\'t mean YOLO. I want to enjoy happiness for long time so I prepare for my future. I enjoy the process that I prepare for it and I think it will give me satisfaction in the end.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] [이름]!
Thanks for writing your homework! ^^
Life is indeed beautiful and should be thankful for. :)
See you tomorrow~
Life is indeed beautiful and should be thankful for. :)
See you tomorrow~
-T.Jhozel
For me, life means present.
>> Correct!
OR: Life to me means being in the moment.
If we think a little more, it doesn\'t make sense that we are.
>> Correct!
OR: If we think about it more, it doesn\'t make sense that we are.
It\'s a ridiculous sentence but anyway.
>> Correct!
OR: It\'s a ridiculous sentence, but still.
So I think I should think my life as a miracle and thank for it.
>> Correct!
OR: So I think that I should view my life as a miracle and be grateful for it.
That\'s why I want to live my life well.
>> Correct!
OR: That is why I want to live my life well.
My life is literally all I have and it\'s precious for me.
>> Correct!
OR: My life is literally all I have, and it is precious to me.
So I want to enjoy my life well. It doesn\'t mean YOLO.
>> Correct!
OR: So I want to enjoy my life to the fullest. It does not mean YOLO.
I want to enjoy happiness for long time so I prepare for my future.
>> Correct!
OR: I want to enjoy happiness for a long time, so I\'m planning for the future.
I enjoy the process that I prepare for it and I think it will give me satisfaction in the end
>> Correct!
OR: I enjoy the process that I prepare for, and I believe that it will give me satisfaction in the end.
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