What is the most annoying thing for you? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
What is the most annoying thing for you? Why? - Chapter 1
I have 3 annoying things.
From now I am going to talk about my 3 annoying things. Are you ready teacher Sheila? Before my opinion, let\'s see what Sheila\'s opinions are first.
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Thank you for sharing your idea. Now listen carefully because I will just tell you one time!
First thing that makes me annoying is academys. Excepts shcool I do Power English (Subject: English), Win Shcool (Subject: English), STL (Subject: English), Kim Sam (SUbject: Math), Pose Ballet (Subject: Pose Ballet) and Clarinet (Subject: Clarinet). Monday: STL, Tuseday: WIn School, Clarinet, Wednesday: Kim Sam, Thursday: STL, Friday: WIn School, Ballet, Saturday: Kim Sam. Like you saw I go academys almost everyday, even Saturday. This is first thin that makes me annoying. Ready for chapter 2! Bye!
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ella! Your homework is very detailed today. Thank you for sharing your schedule to me. You are such a busy person but don\'t worry because these will help you in the future. :)
Until the next one!
See you in class! ^_^
~Teacher Sheila :)
>>Thank you for sharing your ideas.
Now listen carefully because I will just tell you one time!
>>CORRECT
OR>>Now listen carefully because I will just tell you once.
First thing that makes me annoying is academys.
>>The first thing that annoys me is going to academies.
OR>>Academies is the first thing that annoys me.
Excepts shcool I do Power English (Subject: English), Win Shcool (Subject: English), STL (Subject: English), Kim Sam (SUbject: Math), Pose Ballet (Subject: Pose Ballet) and Clarinet (Subject: Clarinet).
>>Except school, I do Power English, WIn school and STL for English, Kim Sam for Math, pose ballet and clarinet.
Monday: STL, Tuseday: WIn School, Clarinet, Wednesday: Kim Sam, Thursday: STL, Friday: WIn School, Ballet, Saturday: Kim Sam.
>>I got to STL every Monday, WIn school and clarinet every Tuesday, Kim Sam every Wednesday, STL again for Thursday, WIn School and Ballet every Friday and then Kim Sam again every Saturday.
Like you saw I go academys almost everyday, even Saturday.
>>Just like what you saw, I go to academies almost every day, even on Saturdays.
This is first thin that makes me annoying.
>>This is the first thing that annoys me.
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