What is the most beatiful for you , the moon or the sun?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like sun and moon both.
The sun is bright and my three favorite colors are Red ,Orange and Yellow.
And moon is bright and our planet\'s satellite!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Great class and great homework!
T. DON
I like sun and moon both.
The sun is bright and my three favorite colors are Red ,Orange and Yellow.
And moon is bright and our planet\'s satellite!
The sun is bright and my three favorite colors are Red ,Orange and Yellow.
And moon is bright and our planet\'s satellite!
>> I like both the sun and moon. The sun is bright and my three favorite colors are Red ,Orange and Yellow. The moon gives light at night on our planet\'s satellite!
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