What is the most beautiful city in the world for you? Why?
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I think the most beautiful cities in the world are paris, Tokyo, Prague, Hawaii and Ottawa because These cities are both natural and developed.
(It\'s a personal opinion)
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What is the most beautiful city in the world for you? Why?
I think the most beautiful cities in the world are paris, Tokyo, Prague, Hawaii and Ottawa because These cities are both natural and developed.
(It\'s a personal opinion)
>> Personally, I think the most beautiful cities in the world are Paris, Tokyo, Prague, Hawaii, and Ottawa because they are both natural and well-developed.
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