What is the most beautiful place in Australia you have ever visited?
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Well, the Brisbane city hall that I sent a picture to you is the most beautiful place even I toured the only Brisbane. I can\'t believe they are ready for Christmas season ahead of a month. Most Korean tend to prepare for only Christmas and Eve. There are light, big Christmas tree, big Santa Claus, etc. They\'re harmonized, it makes Brisbane city hall more beautiful.
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Good day, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
Well, the Brisbane city hall that I sent a picture to you is the most beautiful place even I toured the only Brisbane.
>> Well, the Brisbane city hall that I sent a picture to you is the most beautiful place I only even toured in Brisbane.
I can\'t believe they are ready for Christmas season ahead of a month.
>> CORRECT!Most Korean tend to prepare for only Christmas and Eve.
>> Most Koreans tend to prepare for only Christmas and Christmas Eve.
There are light, big Christmas tree, big Santa Claus, etc.
>> There are lights, a big Christmas tree, a big Santa Claus, etc.
They\'re harmonized, it makes Brisbane city hall more beautiful.
>> CORRECT!
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