What is the most beautiful song you have heard? How did that song make you feel?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t have any knowledge about music, but I listen some music on Youtube. I love a gorgeous musician group, \'Sunset Rollercoaster\' from Taiwan. Even though I can not understand the lyric, I like the cool, sensitive sound. The most magnificent song of them is \'My Jinji\'. It makes me be immersed in romantic emotion.
강사 첨삭
Good day Sue!
I listened to \"My Jinji\" and it is indeed very cool! It\'s very relaxing. :D
See yah later~
~Elsa
I don\'t have any knowledge about music, but I listen some music on Youtube.
>> CORRECT.
OR >> I don\'t know much about music but I listen to some music on Youtube.
I love a gorgeous musician group, \'Sunset Rollercoaster\' from Taiwan.
>> CORRECT.
OR >> I love this gorgeous band from Taiwan--Sunset Rollercoaster.
Even though I can not understand the lyric, I like the cool, sensitive sound.
>> Even though I cannot understand the lyrics, I like its cool, sensitive sound.
The most magnificent song of them is \'My Jinji\'.
>> CORRECT.
OR >> Their most magnificent song is \"My Jinji\".
It makes me be immersed in romantic emotion.
>> CORRECT.
OR >> It gives me a romantic vibe.
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