What is the most beautiful thing in your life
학생이 쓴 원문
In my life, the most beautiful thing is my personal experience.
I studied abroad alone so I had to everything by myself.
And I met a lot of people who have different characters. And also I experienced different cultures too.
Therefore my personal experience is really important thing in my life and it is very valuable.
I believe that this experience will be helpful and useful in future.
강사 첨삭
1. In my life, the most beautiful thing is my personal experience.
>>CORRECT
OR>>My personal experience is the most beautiful thing in my life.
2. I studied abroad alone so I had to everything by myself.
>>I studied abroad alone so, I had to do everything by myself.
3. And I met a lot of people who have different characters.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Also, I met many people with different characters.
4. And also I experienced different cultures too.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Moreover, I experienced different cultures too.
5. Therefore my personal experience is really important thing in my life and it is very valuable.
>>CORRECT
OR>>So, I could say that my personal experience is really important thing in my life and it is very meaningful.
6.I believe that this experience will be helpful and useful in future.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I know that this experience will be helpful and useful in future.
Very good sentences.
I agree with what you said.
- T. Melody ^^
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