What is the most challenging about moving to a new place?
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Most of all, adjusting to all new things is the most difficult for me. In my case, coming to Canada was the most challenging thing. Because I always have some troubles speaking and listening to English and I couldn’t be with my family and friends anymore. I’m still having a hard time because of the reasons.
Next, I hate packing and organizing my stuff for moving. I realized that I had tons of stuff in my room before coming to Canada so I had to throw out and organize some stuff first. I sent just what I think is important to Canada by ship. It’s very expensive, but it’s cheaper than by airplane. Its service by ship is very late so it took almost 3 months. I was tired of waiting for it. Korea’s delivery service is too fast and I can buy something cheap online easily so I just bought something for later. I didn’t need it right now though. I think it’s not a good habit. After that day, I decided not to buy anything too much for myself. I’m trying to buy only what I really need for myself.
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Most of all, adjusting to all new things is the most difficult for me.
>>> correct
In my case, coming to Canada was the most challenging thing. Because I always have some troubles speaking and listening to English and I couldn’t be with my family and friends anymore.
>>> correct
>>> OR: In my case, coming to Canada was the most challenging thing because I always have some troubles speaking and listening to English and I couldn’t be with my family and friends anymore.
I’m still having a hard time because of the reasons.
>>> OR: I’m still having a hard time because of these reasons.
Next, I hate packing and organizing my stuff for moving.
>>> correct
I realized that I had tons of stuff in my room before coming to Canada so I had to throw out and organize some stuff first.
>>> correct
I sent just what I think is important to Canada by ship.
>>> correct
It’s very expensive, but it’s cheaper than by airplane.
>>> correct
Its service by ship is very late so it took almost 3 months.
>>> The service by ship is very late so it took almost 3 months.
>>> OR: The service by ship is quite slow so it took almost 3 months.
I was tired of waiting for it.
>>> correct
Korea’s delivery service is too fast and I can buy something cheap online easily so I just bought something for later.
>>> correct
I didn’t need it right now though.
>>> correct
I think it’s not a good habit.
>>> correct
After that day, I decided not to buy anything too much for myself.
>>> correct
I’m trying to buy only what I really need for myself.
>>> correct
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