What is the most common dream job among your peers?
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Almost my peers say that they want to be an sports. Because I have met them in the sports center. So my friends like to play sports. And they say that they want to be an sports.
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Almost my peers say that they want to be an sports. Because I have met them in the sports center.
>> Almost all my peers say that they want to be professional athletes because I have met them in the sports center.
So my friends like to play sports. And they say that they want to be an sports.
>> So my friends like to play sports and they say that they want to be professional sportspeople.
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