What is the most common kind of crime in South Korea? What should be done to avoid this from happeni

2022-07-18 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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Hmmmmmmm... I can\'t easily answer this one. But, I guess that it\'s a fraud crime like Voice fishing, financial fraud and stock fraud, etc. And I think these should be prevented, you should be careful with yourself. Also, the government needs to strengthen the punishment.

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Hmmmmmmm... I can\'t easily answer this one.

>> I can\'t easily answer this one.

But, I guess that it\'s a fraud crime like Voice fishing, financial fraud and stock fraud, etc.

>> But I guess it\'s fraud like voice fishing, financial fraud and stock fraud.

And I think these should be prevented, you should be careful with yourself.

>> And I think these should be prevented. You should be careful as well.

Also, the government needs to strengthen the punishment.

>> CORRECT

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