What is the most dangerous country in the world?
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I think that the most dangerous country in the world is North Korea. The people of North Korea is ruled by a powerful commander. Also, they don\'t have the vaccine of COVID-19. So I think that the North Korea is the most dangerous country in the world.
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I think that the most dangerous country in the world is North Korea.
>> or: I personally think that Korea is the most dangerous one.
The people of North Korea is ruled by a powerful commander.
>> The people of North Korea are ruled by a powerful commander.
Also, they don\'t have the vaccine of COVID-19.
>> or: Also, they don\'t have COVID-19 vaccines.
So I think that the North Korea is the most dangerous country in the world.
>> So I think that North Korea is the most dangerous country in the world.
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