What is the most dangerous thing in your home?

The most dangerous thing in my home for a child is a sharp edged table. Children often hit against the sharp edges of the table and are injured. Therefore their parents put a soft sticker on edges of the table. The sticker is tender like a jelly. Hence, a slippery tiles floor is one of the most dangerous things. In my cace, it happend not at my home but in a swimming pool. The swimming pool floor is very very slippery. I fell to the ground and then two of my teeth were broken. I was very hurt and want to be never reminded of that.

Hi [이름]! Great job! You were able to express yourself well in this composition. J Just be reminded of the proper use of articles and prepositions. Take note of the verb tenses as well. Keep up the good work! CIAO!=T.Marie=What is the most dangerous thing in your home?               >> correct>> What is the most dangerous thing in your house? - betterThe most dangerous thing in my home for a child is a sharp edged table. >> correctChildren often hit against the sharp edges of the table and are injured.>> correct Therefore their parents put a soft sticker on edges of the table. >> Therefore, their parents often put soft stickers on the edges of the table.The sticker is tender like a jelly.>> The sticker is tender/soft like jelly.Hence, a slippery tiles floor is one of the most dangerous things. >> Hence, the slippery tiled floor is one of the most dangerous things in my house.In my cace, it happend not at my home but in a swimming pool. >> In my case, it happened not in my house but in a swimming pool.The swimming pool floor is very very slippery.>> correct>> The swimming pool floor is extremely slippery. - betterI fell to the ground and then two of my teeth were broken. >> I fell to the ground and broke two of my teeth.I was very hurt and want to be never reminded of that.>> I got hurt badly and I never want to be reminded of that again.