What is the most dangerous thing in your home?
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nowadays, the most dangerous thing in our home is slippery bathroom.
>> Nowadays, the most dangerous place in our house is our slippery bathroom.
i have lived in my home since i was middle school student.
>> I have been living in this house since I was in middle school.
the bathroom tiles are worn because they\'re too old.
>> CORRECT!
or:
>> The bathroom tiles are worn because they\'re too old.
so we need to change that tiles. but we don\'t have to change that. . because next year we will go to the new house!!
>> We need to change our tiles but we have decided not to do that because we are moving to a new house next year.
so my mother buy non slip slippers~~~~ i\'m expecting that sleeper now!
>> My mother bought non-slip slippers for me and I\'m expecting to receive them soon.
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