What is the most dangerous thing in your home?

2018-09-14 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

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nowadays, the most dangerous thing in our home is slippery bathroom. i have lived in my home since i was middle school student. the bathroom tiles are worn because they're too old. so we need to change that tiles. but we don't have to change that. because next year we will go to the new house!! so my mother buy non slip slippers~~~~ i'm expecting that sleeper now!

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! Be careful next time! I hope your bruises heal soon. See you! ~Teacher Elisha

nowadays, the most dangerous thing in our home is slippery bathroom.

>> Nowadays, the most dangerous place in our house is our slippery bathroom.
 i have lived in my home since i was middle school student.

>> I have been living in this house since I was in middle school.
 the bathroom tiles are worn because they\'re too old.

>> CORRECT!

or:

>> The bathroom tiles are worn because they\'re too old. 
 so we need to change that tiles. but we don\'t have to change that. 
.  because next year we will go to the new house!!

>> We need to change our tiles but we have decided not to do that because we are moving to a new house next year.
 so my mother buy non slip slippers~~~~ i\'m expecting that sleeper now!

>> My mother bought non-slip slippers for me and I\'m expecting to receive them soon.  


 

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