What is the most difficult change you have ever had to make?

2021-01-12 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Until this time, I am not have difficulting in my life. but recently, I have troubling from small change. because I am not smoking since 01/01/2021. I will definitely overcome from smoke attracting.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. [이름]tina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


Until this time, I am not have difficulting in my life.

>> Until this time, I haven\'t had any difficulties in my life.
but recently, I have troubling from small change.

>> But recently, I have some troubles from a small change that happened.
because I am not smoking since 01/01/2021.

>> This is because I haven\'t been smoking since the first of January this 2021.
I will definitely overcome from smoke attracting.

>> I will definitely overcome the temptations of smoking.

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