What is the most difficult change you have ever had to make?
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Hi [이름]!
I hope that you are adjusting well in your new department. Keep up the good work!
~Kelly^^
It is changing department of company.
>> It\'s when I was transferred to a different department in my company.
It means that my main task is changed.
>> It means that the nature of my work has changed.
In previous department, i met korean customer and went business trip 3times a week.
>> In my previous department, I meet Korean customers and I go on a business three times a week.
But in current department, i had to meet foreigner customer and went business trip once a month.
>> But in my current department, I have to meet foreign customers and go on a business trip once a month.
Accordingly, i do my work more thoroughly because i should solve all work in one meeting.
>> Accordingly, I do my work thoroughly because I need to finish all my tasks in one meeting.
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