What is the most difficult decision that you have had to make?
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I think all choice are difficult, but I try to choose doing my best, even if It will not be real best.
>>I think all choices are difficult, but I try to do my best even if it will not be the best.
Nevertheless, the best difficult decision is to study for entree of great university.
>>Nevertheless, the most difficult decision is to study for an entree in a great university.
When I was first and second grade in high school student, I loved playing and I hated studying.
>>When I was a freshman and sophomore in high school, I enjoyed playing and I hated studying.
Even if I enrolled at a great high school in my city I was frustrated that there are really many smarter students in my school.
>>Even if I enrolled at a great high school in my city, I was frustrated that there were really many smarter students in my school.
I love to hang out with many friends, and I enjoy to go another place to play.
>>I love to hang out with my friends, and I enjoy going to another place to play.
When the time to entrance exam go closely to me, I wanted to have a job I want.
>>As the time for the entrance exam moved closer, I eagerly wanted to have a job.
To enroll the university I want, I had to study very hard.
>>I had to study hard to enter a university I wanted.
So I decided to be crazy in studying for my future.
>>So I decided to put more effort in studying hard for my future.
I\'d never played before the exam since second grade\'s winter vacation.
>>I have never played before an exam since my sophomore\'s winter vacation.
Many friends and teachers were very surprised about this situation.
>>Correct.
Finally, the efforts made the present, and I learned the way to try with persistent efforts.
>>Finally, my efforts gave a good result. And I learned the best way to try something with persistence.
I can do anythings with this experience since then.
>>I can do many things with this experience since then.
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