What is the most difficult obstacle you have ever encountered?
학생이 쓴 원문
Putting aside challenges or obstacles I faced at work, let me look back on my personal life. It was fortunate for me to have lived so far relatively comfortable life without serious problems, although I encountered some minor issues. Although I was born and grew up in a small town in the countryside in the family who was in extreme poverty and had to worry about the lack of food all the time, I managed to survive and could finish high school and college as other kids who grew up in wealthy families and big cities. My family’s difficult financial condition made me choose to go to a vocational high school, which eventually made me spend an additional year to prepare to go to college. Comparing to others who had to go through much tougher life due to various reasons like being born disabled, losing parents at early age, or getting into an accident and became disabled, I should appreciate all the things that I have and what I am. My difficulties were just too trivial things.
강사 첨삭
Happy Tuesday, Sir [이름]!
We should be thankful for what we have. We should always appreicate the things that we have.
I admire you for striving hard to reach your goals.
To be honest, because of the stories that you shared before, you are one of my inspirations in life.
It is because you don\'t stop until you reach your goals.
Thank you so much.
See you in class.
Teacher Nina
Putting aside challenges or obstacles I faced at work, let me look back on my personal life.
>> correct
It was fortunate for me to have lived so far relatively comfortable life without serious problems, although I encountered some minor issues.
>> correct
Although I was born and grew up in a small town in the countryside in the family who was in extreme poverty and had to worry about the lack of food all the time, I managed to survive and could finish high school and college as other kids who grew up in wealthy families and big cities.
>> Better: Although, I was born and grew up in a small town in the countryside in the family who was in extreme poverty and had to worry about the lack of food all the time, I managed to survive and finished high school and college like the other kids who grew up in wealthy families and big cities.
My family’s difficult financial condition made me choose to go to a vocational high school, which eventually made me spend an additional year to prepare to go to college.
>> correct
Comparing to others who had to go through much tougher life due to various reasons like being born disabled, losing parents at early age, or getting into an accident and became disabled, I should appreciate all the things that I have and what I am.
>> correct
My difficulties were just too trivial things.
>> correct
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