What is the most difficult thing about your job
학생이 쓴 원문
There are many things.
First, There are too many unexpected variables.
for example, Logistics are delayed or production dates are delayed.
when it is difficult because buyers have different requirements.
However, I feel so good when I make the contract.
Conclusion, I love my job.
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework this day!
~Teacher Sheila^_^
>>CORRECT
OR>>There are a lot of things.
First, There are too many unexpected variables.
>>First, there are too many unexpected variables.
for example, Logistics are delayed or production dates are delayed.
>>For example, either logistics are delayed or production dates are delayed.
when it is difficult because buyers have different requirements.
>>It is difficult because buyers have different requirements.
However, I feel so good when I make the contract.
>>CORRECT
O>>However, I feel so good when I close a deal.
Conclusion, I love my job.
>>In conclusion, I love my job.
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