What is the most difficult thing you've ever learned? What are the ways you did to reach the result

Thanks for sending this JM!

I appreciate your effort. There are just some things that I want to point out.

When you are writing sentences, you should follow the correct capitalization of words. A sentences always begins with an upper case alphabet.  Also, refrain from capitalizing the beginning of words in mid-sentence, unless they are proper nouns. Learn the different sentence patterns. I have some questions regarding your essay so I would raise them tomorrow in class.

See you!

~Teacher Shanee^^,

I`ve never thought of moving other division from domestic sales team to quality assurance team in the beginning of the year.

>>> I`ve never thought of moving to another division, from domestic sales team to quality assurance team, in the beginning of the year.   

moreover, My major was international commerce in the univ. so, I`m unfamiliar with machinety treats and raw metrial`s treats.

>>> Moreover, my major was International Commerce so I\'m familiar with machinery and raw material trades.

before the assemble our product, we always have to inspect partition`s raw material that whether normal or disnormal in comparation with standard.

>>> Before assembling our products, we always have to inspect the partition of raw materials whether it is in accordance with the standard.

It is important to have the knowledge for me act as inpector.

>>> It is important for me as an inspector to have that knowledge.

to familiar with that, I invest my time in the office about an one hour by searching metrial treats and technical terms.

>>> To be familiar with that, I spend one hour every day searching for material treats and technical terms.

I just think that It is best way to expriece about that in the office and factory.

>>> I just think that it is best to experience that in the office or in the factory.

I expect that after passing 1year I will have knowledge and experise terms naturally.

>>> I expect that after one year of doing the same routine, I will be able to enrich my knowledge in that area.  

and my aim is to be a expert without other`s help like a searching and remarks from the seniors.

>>> My aim is to be an expert without other\'s help.