What is the most effective way to keep in touch with your loved ones?

2023-02-06 · 첨삭 강사 Lyn

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Thinking their existence or feeling thankful, I usually touch with them and say thank you. It is important to often deliver our mind to them. Nothing I can’t do when I am busy, I try to touch with them well.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jenna, good day! Keep in touch with your loved ones. Now, we can easily communicate with people. We are very lucky.~ T. Lyn
Thinking their existence or feeling thankful, I usually touch with them and say thank you.
>>As I think about my loved ones, their existence as well as when I feel grateful, I usually get in touch with them and say thank you.
It is important to often deliver our mind to them.
>>It important to regularly express to them about how we feel and think.
Nothing I can’t do when I am busy, I try to touch with them well.
>>There is nothing I can\'t do when I am busy, and I try to keep in touch with all of them well.

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