What is the most embarrassing moment that you can remember happening to you?

2024-08-15 · 첨삭 강사 Trixia

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Thirty years ago, I was playing in a pool diving with my friends. I went out of the pool after diving, and one of my friends pointed at me in a whisper. I asked him again what he had said. I noticed him pointing at my boobs and saying, \"Hide!\" And I noticed that my bikini top had slipped slightly to the side. I was really embaressed.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름] [이름]!
Oh. I had the same experience! But that wasn\'t my most embarrassing moment. I had vocal training with my crush in seventh grade, but my voice cracked when I was at the singing competition and everyone laughed. I was hoping that I\'d vanish at that moment. I\'m still embarrassed now that I\'m just telling it. :D
~ Trixia

Content:

Thirty years ago, I was playing in a pool diving with my friends.

- Thirty years ago, I was diving in a pool with my friends.

I went out of the pool after diving, and one of my friends pointed at me in a whisper.

- CORRECT.

I asked him again what he had said.

- CORRECT.

I noticed him pointing at my boobs and saying, \"Hide!\" and I noticed that my bikini top had slipped slightly to the side.

- I noticed him pointing at my boobs and saying, \"Hide!\" and I noticed that my bikini top had slipped slightly to the side.

I was really embaressed.

- I was really embarrassed.

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