What is the most enjoyable holiday in Korea?
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I think chusek is most enjoyable holiday in korea. Because I can meet my cousins and grandparents. Also I can eat many food. Most people like suinar than chusek because they can got money. But I think having a time with family is more important.
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I think chusek is most enjoyable holiday in korea. Because I can meet my cousins and grandparents. Also I can eat many food. Most people like suinar than chusek because they can got money. But I think having a time with family is more important.
>> I think Chuseok is the most enjoyable holiday in Korea because I can meet my cousins and grandparents. Also, I can eat a lot of food. Most people like Seollal more than Chuseok because they can get money, but I think having or spending time with family is more important.
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