What is the most exciting part of a concert? Answer in a few sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
The most exciting part of a concert is a beginning. I cannot forget the moment when it starts. Singers highlighted the introduction, so they used special stage effects such as lights, a lift, a screen, a lazer and even a costume. It gives me a great excitement and impression.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Judy!
Concerts were made to impress the viewers by giving them an experience like no other. It is all a part and parcel of all of the events and the story.I am sure, IU\'s concert was a total blast. Unfortunately, you cannot watch it until the end. It must be spectacular as well.
Anyway, as you shared your experience below, there are a few grammar suggestions made. Read and study them carefully. Your exposition was very clear, interesting, and organized. Well done!
See you in a few.
-T. Donna~
The most exciting part of a concert is a beginning.
>> The most exciting part of a concert is the beginning.
I cannot forget the moment when it starts.
>> Correct!
Or: I cannot forget the moment when it started.
Singers highlighted the introduction, so they used special stage effects such as lights, a lift, a screen, a lazer and even a costume.
>> Correct!
Or: Singers highlighted the introduction, so they used special stage effects such as lights, a lift, a screen, a lazer, and even a costume.
It gives me a great excitement and impression.
>> Correct!
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