What is the most exciting thing you have ever done?
학생이 쓴 원문
Twelve years ago, I belonged a soccer team. The team participated a soccer tournament. I scored one goal at first game. After getting one goal, I felt a thrill from toes to the head. I couldn\'t see clearly for a while. I can remember at that instant as now. Even if we lost the game. it was fantastic memory for me.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]ny,
Thank you for sharing this memory with me. Scoring a goal in soccer is truly an exciting experience because it can be quite rare. Congratulations on scoring this goal (even if it was 12 years ago ^_^ )
Regards,
T. Angelica
Twelve years ago, I belonged a soccer team. >> CORRECT.
OR >> Twelve years ago, I was part of a soccer team.
The team participated a soccer tournament.
>> The team participated in a soccer tournament.
I scored one goal at first game.
>>I scored one goal during the first game.
After getting one goal, I felt a thrill from toes to the head.
>> ... I felt a thrill from my toes to my head.
I couldn\'t see clearly for a while.
>> CORRECT.
I can remember at that instant as now.
>> I can remember that instance even until now.
Even if we lost the game. it was fantastic memory for me.
>> CORRECT, but remember to use a comma (,) instead of a period (.)
>> Even if we lost the game, it was a fantastic memory for me.
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