What is the most expensive item you have purchased, and do you think it was worth the price?
학생이 쓴 원문
I bought a watch 10 years ago .It\'s very expencive my whole life .The brand is Rolex.
I wanted to get the watch for a long time .I love it and I will hand dawn to my daughter.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ju Mi! I’m sure your daughter will love the watch! Enjoy your Monday today! ^^ Take care~
~T. Jewel
I bought a watch 10 years ago.
>>CORRECT
It\'s very expencive my whole life .
>>It’s the most expensive thing I’ve bought in my whole life.
The brand is Rolex.
>>CORRECT
I wanted to get the watch for a long time .
I wanted to get the watch for a long time .
>>I’ve wanted to get that watch for a long time.
I love it and I will hand dawn to my daughter.
>>I love it and I plan to pass it down to my daughter.
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