What is the most expensive kind of alcohol in your country?

2021-04-19 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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Sul simply translates as \"alcohol\". It\'s mostly made from grains, with rice being the most common one. Makgeolli is labelled as a milky and sweet alcoholic drink. It is Korea\'s most representative and oldest traditional liquor that is commercially available today in a plastic bottle. It has a low alcoholic content of about 6 to 7 percent

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~ T. Camille

Sul simply translates as \"alcohol\". 
>> The word \"Sul\" is simply translated as \"alcohol\". 

It\'s mostly made from grains, with rice being the most common one.
>> CORRECT!

Makgeolli is labelled as a milky and sweet alcoholic drink. 
>> CORRECT!

It is Korea\'s most representative and oldest traditional liquor that is commercially available today in a plastic bottle.
>>  It is Korea\'s most preserved and oldest traditional liquor that is commercially available today in a plastic bottle.

It has a low alcoholic content of about 6 to 7 percent.
>> CORRECT!

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