What is the most expensive restaurant that you have ever been to?
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Good morning, [이름]nah!
I would like to visit the restaurant that you wrote. The one which is located in Lotte Hotel. I want to eat good food and at the same time be able to enjoy the view too. T[이름]k you for sharing!
See you later!
-Teacher Shelly-
I am a lucky person.
>>> Correct!
I have two precious sons that both of are gourmet.
>>> I have two precious sons, both of them like gourmet cooked foods.
They are work hard after they go to very nice restaurant and enjoy each meal.
>>> They work hard, after that, they go to a very nice restaurant and enjoy every meal.
I have been 5stars restaurants many times, in swiitzerland, Hongkong, China, US, Spain, etc.
>>> I have been to 5-star restaurants many times, in Switzerland, Hong Kong, China, the U.S., Spain, etc.
As you know I ‘m a picky eater, that is why I couldn’t enjoy nice restaurant.
>>> As you know, I\'m a picky eater, that is why I couldn\'t enjoy eating at a nice restaurant.
But if I choose one of them I can pick Korean restaurant rocation is the Lotte Hotel in Seoul.
>>> But if I choose one of them, I want to pick a Korean Restaurant in Lotte Hotel which is located in Seoul.
The name is stay Kind of Korean cuisine restaurant, I love that view.
>>> The name is \" Stay\", it is a restaurant which serves Korean cuisine, I love the view.
I can see out side Seoul area and [이름] river because there are 83th floor.
>>> I can see the area outside Seoul and [이름] river because they are on the 83rd floor.
Chef came from France.
>>> The chef is from France.
There are great service, also not to crowded.
>>> The service is great and it is not also crowded.
My whole family are food lover except me.
>>> My whole family loves food except me.
Nowadays I am trying to attempt any food, but still is hard for me.
>>> Nowadays, I am trying to eat any kind of food, but it is still hard for me.
My character is stable , when I getting older I know that if I c[이름]ged something not easy to figure out .rightaway.
>>> My character is stable, when I getting older, I know that if I c[이름]ge something it wouldn\'t be easy to find out right away.
But I don’ give up everythin.
>>> I\'m not giving up everything.
I am trying more harder ,later on I think I got better results.
>>> I am trying harder, later on, I think I will get better results.
I wish one day I love food as my family.
>>> I wish one day I will also love food like other members of my family.
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