What is the most expensive restaurant that you have ever been to?

2018-12-06 · 첨삭 강사 Shelly

학생이 쓴 원문

I am a lucky person. I have two precious sons that both of are gourmet. They are work hard after they go to very nice restaurant and enjoy each meal.I have been 5stars restaurants many times, in swiitzerland, Hongkong, China, US, Spain, etc. As you know I ‘m a picky eater, that is why I couldn’t enjoy nice restaurant. But if I choose one of them I can pick Korean restaurant rocation is the Lotte Hotel in Seoul. The name is stay Kind of Korean cuisine restaurant, I love that view. I can see out side Seoul area and [이름] river because there are 83th floor. Chef came from France. There are great service, also not to crowded. My whole family are food lover except me. Nowadays I am trying to attempt any food, but still is hard for me. My character is stable , when I getting older I know that if I c[이름]ged something not easy to figure out .rightaway. But I don’ give up everythin. I am trying more harder ,later on I think I got better results. I wish one day I love food as my family.

강사 첨삭

Good morning, [이름]nah!


I would like to visit the restaurant that you wrote. The one which is located in Lotte Hotel. I want to eat good food and at the same time be able to enjoy the view too. T[이름]k you for sharing!

See you later!


-Teacher Shelly-



I am a lucky person.

>>> Correct!

I have two precious sons that both of are gourmet.

>>> I have two precious sons, both of them like gourmet cooked foods.

 They are work hard after they go to very nice restaurant and enjoy each meal.

>>> They work hard, after that, they go to a very nice restaurant and enjoy every meal.

I have been 5stars restaurants many times, in swiitzerland, Hongkong, China, US, Spain, etc.

>>> I have been to 5-star restaurants many times, in Switzerland, Hong Kong, China, the U.S., Spain, etc. 
 As you know I ‘m a picky eater, that is why I couldn’t enjoy nice restaurant.

>>> As you know, I\'m a picky eater, that is why I couldn\'t enjoy eating at a nice restaurant.
 But if I choose one of them I can pick Korean restaurant rocation is the Lotte Hotel in Seoul.

>>> But if I choose one of them, I want to pick a Korean Restaurant in Lotte Hotel which is located in Seoul.
 The name is stay Kind of Korean cuisine restaurant, I love that view.

>>> The name is \" Stay\", it is a restaurant which serves Korean cuisine, I love the view.

I can see out side Seoul area and [이름] river because there are 83th floor.

>>> I can see the area outside Seoul and [이름] river because they are on the 83rd floor.

 Chef came from France.

>>> The chef is from France.
 There are great service, also not to crowded.

>>> The service is great and it is not also crowded.

 My whole family are food lover except me.

>>> My whole family loves food except me.
 Nowadays I am trying to attempt any food, but still is hard for me.

>>> Nowadays, I am trying to eat any kind of food, but it is still hard for me.

My character is stable , when I getting older I know that if I c[이름]ged something not easy to figure out .rightaway.

>>> My character is stable, when I getting older, I know that if I c[이름]ge something it wouldn\'t be easy to find out right away.

 But I don’ give up everythin.

>>> I\'m not giving up everything.

  I am trying more harder ,later on I think I got better results.

>>> I am trying harder, later on, I think I will get better results.

I wish one day I love food as my family.

>>> I wish one day I will also love food like other members of my family.

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