What is the most expensive thing that you would want to buy and why?

2022-06-18 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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Absolutely, It\'s a house. I sometimes imagine my dream house, But it\'s hard to be a reality. Because the house prices are ri[이름]g continuously. Also, I can\'t easily get a mortgage loan and the interest rates are going up, too.

강사 첨삭

Hi Elic!

Yes, we should invest our money into important things. :)

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Absolutely, It\'s a house.

>> It would absolutely be a house.

I sometimes imagine my dream house, But it\'s hard to be a reality.

>> I sometimes imagine my dream house, but it\'s hard to turn it into a reality.

Because the house prices are ri[이름]g continuously.

>> It\'s because the house prices here are ri[이름]g continuously.

Also, I can\'t easily get a mortgage loan and the interest rates are going up, too.

>> Also, I can\'t easily get a mortgage loan and the interest rates are going up too.

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