What is the most expensive thing that you would want to buy and why?
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I want to buy a big gym with a lot of fitness equipment.
If I have the gym, then I can train myself well and I don\'t have to wait for the line that are in the gyms.
And also I can enjoy various kinds of fitness equipment, so that I can train my self better.
And I can feel more comfortable because only I use my own gym.
Because of these reasons, the most expensive thing that I would want to buy is a big gym nearby my home.
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Hi [이름]!
Yes, we should invest our money into important things and we have to consider a lot of things in terms of way of living. :)
I want to buy a big gym with a lot of fitness equipment.
>> CORRECT
If I have the gym, then I can train myself well and I don\'t have to wait for the line that are in the gyms.
>> CORRECT
And also I can enjoy various kinds of fitness equipment, so that I can train my self better.
>> And, I can also enjoy various kinds of fitness equipment so that I can train my self better.
And I can feel more comfortable because only I use my own gym.
>> I can also feel more comfortable because I will have my own gym.
Because of these reasons, the most expensive thing that I would want to buy is a big gym nearby my home.
>> CORRECT
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