What is the most expensive thing you’ve bought?
학생이 쓴 원문
The most expensive thing I bought is a laptop.
I don\'t usually spend money well.
The reason was that I didn\'t feel the need to buy expensive things when I was a student.
By the way, the reason I bought a laptop was to attend a class in college.
The price is about 3 million won and it is a game laptop.
I don\'t know why it\'s expensive, but I can use an architectural program to create a 3D image, which works well.
I can do my homework quickly and the image quality is good.
But I think I will have to buy another laptop soon because I have used for more than 3 years.
I don\'t know what I\'m going to buy now, but I\'ll have to study about the laptop .
강사 첨삭
The most expensive thing I bought is a laptop.
>> CORRECT.
I don\'t usually spend money well.
>> CORRECT.
The reason was that I didn\'t feel the need to buy expensive things when I was a student.
>> CORRECT.
By the way, the reason I bought a laptop was to attend a class in college.
>> CORRECT.
The price is about 3 million won and it is a game laptop.
>> The price was about 3 million won and it is a game laptop.
I don\'t know why it\'s expensive, but I can use an architectural program to create a 3D image, which works well.
>> I don\'t know why it\'s so expensive, but I can use an architectural program to create a 3D image, which works well.
I can do my homework quickly and the image quality is good.
>> CORRECT.
But I think I will have to buy another laptop soon because I have used for more than 3 years.
>> But I think I will have to buy another laptop soon because I have used it for more than 3 years.
I don\'t know what I\'m going to buy now, but I\'ll have to study about the laptop .
>> I don\'t know what I\'m going to buy now, but I\'ll have to research about the laptops.
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